Thursday, April 15, 2010

VACATIONS

The vacations are day for enjoy and rest, after of one long time of work, study and different occupation.The place for vacations is very important, because the people that take vacations like nice and quiet place, for example my family and I take vacations every year in December.
My husband end I enjoy go to mountains, beaches, and rivers.
Is good time for share experiment and know different places.

thank lileana

2 comments:

  1. I agree, I like my vacations to be quiet and relaxing.....but I think there are some people who are looking for something more exciting!
    Please spell-check this; some of the words are misspelled.
    Please look at the 2nd sentence again; does it make sense? The first part is about PLACE and the second is about TIME.
    change go to going in the last sentence.

    Please make those changes, and then add a couple of more examples to make it a support/example style paragraph.
    I'll look forward to seeing it!

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