Topic: My favorite place is my home.
Supporting sentence 1: when I am in my home I fell calmness.
Example for supporting sentence 1: I watch T.V. and nobody disruption.
Supporting sentence 2: For my is a private place.
Example for supporting sentence 2: I leave my documents and I don't have problem that somebody take these.
Supporting sentence 3: I receive and attend people in this place.
for example I can have a party with ruler.
CONCLUDING: I think that a house is a place very important for all person.
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Very nice organizing!
ReplyDeleteA few grammar/spelling points:
fell should be feel
nobody disrupts me
For me it is ..
I leave mu documents out....
I have people over and host them, and I am entertain them the way I want.
important for all people.
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ReplyDeleteMaria, the children brind happyness, you don't worry,enjoy their presence on the house.
ReplyDeleteteacher liz, in really I have a problem for make the corregir.
ReplyDeletethank